ME: Absolutely paragon

I think the reason that you think the renegade one turned out better was possibly because of the pose. It was a little more dynamic and had a bigger impact, whereas this one is calmer and not as "look at me, I'm doing a cool pose!" if that makes sense. xD I still like it though. ^^ I think it might have been more effective if she was looking at us, perhaps. Anyway, nice job.